When Fogs Collide
When Fogs CollideIn a forest bent by breeze,blowing branches over leaves,came a thump, thump, thump in the midnight.- All gone was the starlight,- even absent was the moonlight,but a white fog glowed...
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Had that experience some forty three years ago namyh and though the smiling, beguiling, colliding, creeping, leaping and thumping aren't quite as vigorous it's still bliss. Merv
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Namyh, What a unique twist on "fog". So very creative, poet. grand job Dee
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Namyh,This is spritely and fun and sparkly with energy.I kept wanting to read it as 'frogs' but 'fogs' is much more ethereal. You do have a way with thepen.Sarah
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Hi Namyph I agree with Sarah, this is witty version or twists on Poe's , "The Raven". I love the language and rhythm in this piece and the unexpected ending. How often we feel the dread of the moment,...
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Namyh, I have felt the mystery of fogs even here in sunny Arizona and never thought of relating it to my wonderful love. So well done! You both lead us to the mysterious world but you also bring us...
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bush poet – After forty three(add 3 for me)years, if you’re still smiling after being beguiling, confiding while still colliding and creeping before the leaping, don’t worry about the vigor. Just keep...
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Dee - We do it and so do fogs. Kinda glad to know we humans aren't the only ones with unique twists of love. I took extra steps to be creative with this one and enjoyed the writing. Thanks Dee for...
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Sarah – So glad to inject some sprightly fun sparkling with energy into your day, especially without the frogs. There is the ethereal and the non-ethereal. Somewhere between the two is the poet....
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Gwendrina – Look at it this way. When we find ourselves standing on the cliff of lonely despair where hopeless heartbreak is about to make us step into the abyss. Fate steps in, taps the shoulder and...
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Hello, Namyh,Just stopping by to say I have really enjoyed reading & thinking of this poem after the reading. (Love that, you?) I have to laugh as I think of Sarah's reaction as reader. I, too,...
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Jared - I knew that if I charted the stars, consulted the oracles, calculated the planetary orbits and consumed 2 rum strong raspberry lattes; I could intersect at the right place at the right moment...
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Namyh, I responded to this... came back for a second read and my response had gone 'bye-bye'. Anyway I loved the poem, the tempo, the movement and the idea of two fogs colliding and falling in love...
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Willowdown – From frog collision to fogs colliding is a span of adventure that every mortal should enjoy. I’m just glad to be one of them who wrote about it and brought it to you. Thanks...
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Jan – Whether it’s fogs thumping or frogs jumping, I’m so happy you stopped by to enjoy a little reading and a little thinking on this poetic piece. If this motivated you to deeper levels of...
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Maryse – That you loved the poem, the tempo, the movement and fogs falling love to live happily ever after all make for bright stars in my day and night and I thank you. And that you came back for a...
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